Sunday, October 5, 2008

nesnight

I ran through the fields in the cold forest night

the wind in my eyes turning tears out of sight

something i knew i had left in the snow

something so warm still covered below

search though i did no trace there was left

ice took my veins and sleep took the rest



Up in the hills the ground is now thawed

rain waters sweet and fresh wood is sawed

day brings a haze and night brings a fog

night turns to day the bees are then robbed

once we are still, the shadows below

rest on the ground that swallowed me whole

2 comments:

Ms. Frances said...

I love this. I remember asking you this before, but did you write it?

jeremy said...

i dont remember you asking me that, but yea i wrote it and i just did the last part last night. thanks alot, i really feel out of my element writting so im glad its not shit.